u/Common-Purpose-7971

Hey, was just looking for some feedback on my incomplete screenplay for something I would like to turn into a game one day. I know the formatting isn't accurate but I'm just keeping it as is for the drafts.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_zTx_UJ_C5IGcuk4dFIeiwIDZ0HNv_OOvnmcuB_y3iQ/edit?usp=sharing