Looking for feedback on an idea
I'm not looking for feedback on the art. I'm not a professional, I've only been drawing since last fall. I know I need to work on my skills. I made these pics in procreate on my iPad. I did not use ai, any mistakes are because I use procreate tools to cut and move pieces to save time on drawing. I was wondering if anyone could give me feedback on whether ir not this idea is appealing as a story, and if anyone would enjoy the characters.
They don't have names yet, I just kinda work on these when the urge catches me. But the guy in blue is a pigman creature, the furry guy is like a porcupine, and the little guy is a rock person. The story is about an arrogant explorer that broke reality years ago, and different dimensions are bleeding into each other, but not in an apocalyptic way, more funny and chaotic. The pigman and the porcupine guy were basically reluctabtly recruited by some shadow government to hunt the man down. That's all I have right now.