u/Cozymermaid22

I have this series that I have been working on for a while, and it’s currently incomplete. But I have a few complete stories that I would really appreciate some feedback on as one day I intend to publish this series after revisions. Any amount of feedback and critique is welcome and please feel free to leave comments. Thank you!!

This is a Greek mythology series involving Apollo and Hyacinthus. I am looking for help in terms of plot holes, exposition, and characterization. I also encourage help in terms of accuracy for Greek mythology itself.