u/Crazy-Regret-7630

i haven’t written anything in a very long time and i’ve forgotten a lot of grammar rules. I cant figure out how to phrase this properly, my grammar feels all over the place (not to mention crazy run-on)

could someone please help point out the grammar flaws and how I should fix it so I can write better for my future assignments

What Nancy Segal had said about the similarities between the twins Dorothy and Bridget having nearly identical wedding dresses and bouquets, and on the day of their meeting, both having worn seven rings, three bracelets, and one watch really solidified what Nancy Segal was saying into one image. The coincidence in numbers, for me, worked as evidence and verification of what Segal was talking about.

could someone please explain how you would get y here: 2x - 4y = 12 (x is -2)

i’m really stumped

i’ll be going into grade 12 this September but I went to study abroad during my 11th year and i didn’t receive any credits from it. i studied in a private school in BC for grade 10 but i didn’t like it so i was hoping to be able to take online summer school for the mandatory 11 credits then sign up for a new school for 12.

I can’t seem to find any online summer schools that don’t cost and arm and a leg and allow me to take more than two courses. i’m not currently enrolled in a school but i have a PEN and all the requirements regardless.

Does anyone have any experience and can recommend me something ?