u/Creative_Drive_972

I want some feedback on my story called White death. The synopsis of my series is: a beast from the abyss, and he was the very first of his kind to form. The main goal of this beast is to gather powerful warriors to join his kingdom, so he takes an interest in a peculiar boy. I should also tell you that there is a hierarchy among them; they are superior-ranked beasts, lesser beasts, and there's a third one. You'll know about these later on in the story,

The series is on Webnovel and RoyalRoad. The lowercase d is not a mistake. There's another series titled with the same name but with a capital D.

There's this called White death, and the synopsis of this series is that a beast from the abyss, and he was the very first of his kind to form. The main goal of this beast is to gather powerful warriors to join his kingdom, so he takes an interest in a peculiar boy. I should also tell you that there is a hierarchy among them; they are superior-ranked beasts, lesser beasts, and there's a third one. You'll know about these later on in the story,

The thing I like about this story is that the beasts are an interesting concept, and also the protagonist is a Battle Maniac mc. I've always wanted a character like this.

The series is on Webnovel and RoyalRoad. The lowercase d is not a mistake. That is how the series is titled, and it's because there's another with the same name but with a capital D.

There's this called White death, and the synopsis of this series is that a beast from the abyss, and he was the very first of his kind to form. The main goal of this beast is to gather powerful warriors to join his kingdom, so he takes an interest in a peculiar boy. I should also tell you that there is a hierarchy among them; they are superior-ranked beasts, lesser beasts, and there's a third one. You'll know about these later on in the story,

The thing I like about this story is that the beasts are an interesting concept, and also the protagonist is a Battle Maniac mc. I've always wanted a character like this.

The series is on Webnovel, and the lowercase d is not a mistake. That is how the series is titled, and it's because there's another with the same name but with a capital D.