I‘be read a good amount of fanfiction in my time, and am looking for some good, new ones. I want Percy to be badass and I would like if it is a Magnus chase crossover. I also don’t like fanfics where they change the story line a bunch. Please help
I finally updated my fanfiction!!!! Chapter seven is all yours with chapter eight coming soon (tomorrow or Friday)!!!!! Yay me for finishing!!!!!!! :) Here is the link for anyone who needs it [remember you can and should add comments here or in the comments on the website so I know what to change/fix/add in the future]
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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-JGGYxlaVZKJi6O0EmDCObpyINGfosokdd_YliLAry8/edit?usp=drivesdk
What do you think!? You can add comments on the Google Docs of changes you want/think I need to make! I’m also willing to translate to any languages you need!
I’m writing a fanfiction on my phone in messages to myself. I don’t want to have to post the whole story to Reddit every time I need advice. what free websites (no apps plz) could I post on that I could just bring the link to here?
Magnus only knows that Greek/Roman gods & demigods exist any nothing else about them. the meeting I Ship of the Dead never happened. tell me what you think in the comment! don’t be afraid to be harsh!!
Prologue
*The world’s greatest hero and the Norse’s brave two,
Shall sail across the sea to pay a debt that is overdue.
To the ancient domain where the gods have no name,
The silver-tongued liar meets a new state,
And falls by the words of the tide’s bitter weight,
Beneath the command of the Storm-shaker’s fate.*
Chapter One:Magnus POV
“Why are we here again?” Alex asked me for like the hundredth time-okay maybe he only asked me like 5 times-as we approached the Beacon Street Bridge.
“Annabeth contacted me about the prophecy and said we needed to meet up to talk about it-I suggested here.” I reply as the bridge comes into view. Leaning over the bridge, I see my cousin Annabeth smiling at the water. She is as gorgeous as ever with her blonde curls and gray eyes, but she looks sad, as if something is bothering her.
“Annabeth!!” I call out to her.
Instantly, she looks up and grins “Magnus! Alex, good to see you!”
By now we have made it on to the bridge and are hugging.
She pulls away, “Gods you’ve gotten so tall!”
“Yeah, I guess I have.” I mutter followed by an eye roll from Alex.
“As much as I hate to interrupt your family reunion, didn’t we meet here for a reason?” Alex butts in.
“Yes-so why do you need to talk to me about the prophecy?” I ask Annabeth.
Her facial expression darkens “I know the last member you need for the quest.” She seems very upset about that-I wonder why.
“It’s you isn’t it!?” I cry out in realization, “Oh gods Annabeth, why does it have to be you?!? You deserve to relax! Aren’t you in college?!? Oh Gods! You’re the world’s greatest hero?!?”
“Actually, that would be me.” A voice calls out from behind me.
Chapter Two:Magnus POV
“Ahhhhh!” I scream, “Who are you?!?” I ask the newcomer. Oh Gods, he scares me-the way he RADIATES power. I also didn’t realize how hot he was. He was tall, tan, and scrawny in a cute way. His jet black hair blew in the wind while his sea green eyes meet mine. Alex will totally kill me (literally) out of jealousy though. (Life is unfair like that) I’m sure he’s a god in disguise-even though he said otherwise. I mean who just appears like he did?!?
“I’m Percy. Percy Jackson.” he replies.
“N-nice to meet you,” I stutter out. Gods he’s hot. Alex is gonna kill me for sure now.
“I know what you’re thinking, and no, I’m not a god in disguise. I’m a demigod, like you.” Percy states. I don’t like how he knows I’m a demigod, or that he knows what I’m thinking.
“How do you know that?” I ask him.
“Annabeth told me-all about your life actually. Said I need to know what I was getting myself into for once.” He replied with a weird laugh and tone in his voice I can’t read.
“And how would you know Annabeth?” Alex asks-finally joining our conversation.
“He’s my boyfriend-and has been my best friend since we were 12” Annabeth says with a grin. Percy leans down to kiss her-also with a grin on his face. Good. He better treat my cousin right, or else he’s gonna have to meet Jack the hard way.
“No offense or anything but EWWWWW!” Alex exclaims.
“Dude, do you have to be so rude?!” I retort back as our argument breaks out.
Percy breaks our argument before it gets too crazy, “It’s fine” he spits, “Look, are we going to continue talking here, or are we going to Valhalla? I suggest the second option because I’m pretty sure there are some monsters closing in on us.”
I don’t like his tone, but I also feel like we’re being watched.
“Uh….follow me I guess,” I reply as I crawl through a hole I just cut open on to the World Tree. Next stop, Valhalla.
Chapter Three: Percy POV
Alex, Annabeth, and I follow Magnus through the cross-dimensional hole he cut out of thin air. Not the weirdest thing I’ve seen, but it’s definitely up there in like top 20.(yes, unfortunately I have seen A LOT of really weird things) Anyway, through the hole is a giant tree. The branches are the size of normal trees at least. We follow Magnus around the tree until Alex shoves him through a blob of light. Gods, Magnus really does scream like a little girl.
“See you in the other side,” Alex calls out as he jumps through the portal.
Annabeth follows suit, with me being last. I wasn’t going to take the risk that anything happened-I could tell I was the only one on guard. Once we got to the other side, we were in what looked to be a lobby.
“Magnus, good to see you,” a dude called out-his name tag said Hunding
“New Einherji?” This other guy named Helgi (I think that’s what he name tag says) asked
“Nope-they’re here to help with a quest” Alex says with a grin, “so they are going to need rooms.”
Alex and Magnus wander off-probably to the dinning hall.
“Just one, we’re not staying long” I quickly add.
“You smell like the sea, a room with lots of water?” I’m asked.
“That’s fine, can we hurry this up,” I snap. The faster we finish this, the faster me and Annabeth can go back to a normal life.(Well, as normal as we can get it life)
My reply is a glare from Helgi so I give him my wolf glare. He jumps.
“Where did you learn t-“
I cut him off “Lupa, mother of Rome-No I don’t give lessons. Now show us to our room”
“F-follow me.”
He leads us to an elevator, and pushes Floor 19. We get to the top and a bunch of weird looking people pop their heads out. I identify each of them from Annabeth’s stories, and asses their threat levels. He opens the door to a room. I gasp, it’s so me. (That makes me sound selfish-I’m not, I swear) There is water everywhere and it’s all beach themed.
“I’ll leave you to your room,” Helgi stutters out as he quickly leaves the room. Huh, guess I am scary after all. Good. I jump into the pool to relax and am meet with the opposite. All of a sudden I can feel water EVERYWHERE. I can feel it in the air, miles away, and in people’s bodies. Shit. This is bad. This is really bad.
“Percy are you okay?” Annabeth asks me. She also made her way into the pool.
“The water-I..I can feel it everywhere.” That was all I needed to say. She knew what I was thinking.
“I know you made that promise..down there.. but I think this is a sign from the Fates. You’re supposed to use these powers.” she replies.
“But-“
“Just be careful. Practice. Control them.”
“You always know what to say Wise Girl.” I smile. It’s going to be okay.
Chapter Four:Alex POV
Once I see Helgi practically sprinting back to his desk, I drag Magnus out of the dinning hall and into the elevator.
“Where are we going?” Magnus asks like a sad puppy. Gods, he is so over dramatic.
“Helgi just sprinted back to the lobby, so something went down with your cousin and her boyfriend, and we are going to find out what.”
That shut him up. (yay) When we reach Floor 19, everyone is waiting for us outside of a new room. I knock.
“Give us a sec!” A voice calls-I can’t tell who’s. That’s creepy.
Annabeth opens the door. “Come in everyone!” She seems happier than when we first saw her. I note that Magnus also registered this. The room is beach themed with water everywhere.
“Wasn’t there two of you earlier?” T.J. asks, “Where is the guy?”
“Right here.”
T.J. screams and jumps a solid 5 feet. “Where did you come from?!?”
“The pool,” he replies as if it was obvious.
“I-but you’re dry!” I’m also confused. The pool?
“One of the many perks of being a son of Poseidon.” He smirks
“Poseidon? Isn’t he a Greek God?” Mallory asks as her eyes narrow.
“Yep-Annabeth here is a daughter of Athena. The Rome gods are also real.” Percy replies as if this is common knowledge.
“Okay-we’re got stuff to talk about so everyone out,” Magnus tells our confused friends. They listen and vacate the room.
“Aren’t they coming with us?” I ask.
“It says ‘Norse’s Brave Two’ so no” Percy joins in, “Plus, I don’t want to quest with more than 3 people.” He shudders as if that thought brought up bad memories.
“But there with be 4 of us,” Magnus replies.
“No there won’t. I’m going back home” Annabeth cuts in with anger in her voice.
“But-“
“No. The prophecy says ‘World’s greatest hero and the Norse’s Brave Two.’ I won’t let her risk her life for no reason.” Percy interrupts.
Magnus obviously didn’t like something he said and he reaches for Jack. Next thing I know, Percy has Magnus pinned to the wall with a 3 foot sword at his neck. Where did he get a sword?!?
“Don’t pull any tricks on me,” Percy growls.
“Don’t control my cousin,” Magnus snaps back. Oh no. He’s made a horrible mistake.
“He doesn’t control me,” Somehow, in the blink of an eye, Percy and Annabeth have traded places. Annabeth now pins Magnus to the wall with her dagger and Percy is watching with a grin on his face. She lets him go with a shove.
“I’ve got to go-I promised my dad I’d babysit. Magnus, be careful. Alex, watch Magnus.” I salute. That gets a grin from Percy. “Percy, don’t kill my cousin.”
“I’ll do my best,” he replies before he kisses her. She seems to relax a bit.
“I-what?!? That’s not fair!”
“Don’t be such a baby Magnus.” Annabeth replies as she heads back to the safety of Midgard.
I’m writing a fanfiction where Percy meets Magnus somewhere in Norway. Where in Norway should they meet? (somewhere related to Norse Mythology maybe?)
I’m writing a fanfiction and need help. Percy, Magnus, & Alex are going on a quest to save the world. Loki will be involved (main bad guy) They are going to ‘the ancient lands’ bit I don’t know which ones. Greece, Rome, or somewhere important to Norse Mythology. Please give me advice ASAP because I need it to continue writing
Follows lore almost exac but Magnus only knows that the Greeks/Romans exist and nothing more. The meeting in Shop of the Desd never happened. Please review in comments. don’t be afraid to be harsh. [Chapters 1-3. More coming soon]
Prologue
*The world’s greatest hero and the Norse’s brave two,
Shall sail across the sea to pay a debt that is overdue.
To the ancient domain where the gods have no name,
The silver-tongued liar meets a new state,
And falls by the words of the tide’s bitter weight,
Beneath the command of the Storm-shaker’s fate.*
Chapter One:Magnus POV
“Why are we here again?” Alex asked me for like the hundredth time-okay maybe he only asked me like 5 times-as we approached the Beacon Street Bridge.
“Annabeth contacted me about the prophecy and said we needed to meet up to talk about it-I suggested here.” I reply as the bridge comes into view. Leaning over the bridge, I see my cousin Annabeth smiling at the water. She is as gorgeous as ever with her blonde curls and gray eyes, but she looks sad, as if something is bothering her.
“Annabeth!!” I call out to her.
Instantly, she looks up and grins “Magnus! Alex, good to see you!”
By now we have made it on to the bridge and are hugging.
She pulls away, “Gods you’ve gotten so tall!”
“Yeah, I guess I have.” I mutter followed by an eye roll from Alex.
“As much as I hate to interrupt your family reunion, didn’t we meet here for a reason?” Alex butts in.
“Yes-so why do you need to talk to me about the prophecy?” I ask Annabeth.
Her facial expression darkens “I know the last member you need for the quest.” She seems very upset about that-I wonder why.
“It’s you isn’t it!?” I cry out in realization, “Oh gods Annabeth, why does it have to be you?!? You deserve to relax! Aren’t you in college?!? Oh Gods! You’re the world’s greatest hero?!?”
“Actually, that would be me.” A voice calls out from behind me.
Chapter Two:Magnus POV
“Ahhhhh!” I scream, “Who are you?!?” I ask the newcomer. Oh Gods, he scares me-the way he RADIATES power. I also didn’t realize how hot he was. He was tall, tan, and scrawny in a cute way. His jet black hair blew in the wind while his sea green eyes meet mine. Alex will totally kill me (literally) out of jealousy though. (Life is unfair like that) I’m sure he’s a god in disguise-even though he said otherwise. I mean who just appears like he did?!?
“I’m Percy. Percy Jackson.” he replies.
“N-nice to meet you,” I stutter out. Gods he’s hot. Alex is gonna kill me for sure now.
“I know what you’re thinking, and no, I’m not a god in disguise. I’m a demigod, like you.” Percy states. I don’t like how he knows I’m a demigod, or that he knows what I’m thinking.
“How do you know that?” I ask him.
“Annabeth told me-all about your life actually. Said I need to know what I was getting myself into for once.” He replied with a weird laugh and tone in his voice I can’t read.
“And how would you know Annabeth?” Alex asks-finally joining our conversation.
“He’s my boyfriend-and has been my best friend since we were 12” Annabeth says with a grin. Percy leans down to kiss her-also with a grin on his face. Good. He better treat my cousin right, or else he’s gonna have to meet Jack the hard way.
“No offense or anything but EWWWWW!” Alex exclaims.
“Dude, do you have to be so rude?!” I retort back as our argument breaks out.
Percy breaks our argument before it gets too crazy, “It’s fine” he spits, “Look, are we going to continue talking here, or are we going to Valhalla? I suggest the second option because I’m pretty sure there are some monsters closing in on us.”
I don’t like his tone, but I also feel like we’re being watched.
“Uh….follow me I guess,” I reply as I crawl through a hole I just cut open on to the World Tree. Next stop, Valhalla.
Chapter Three: Percy POV
Alex, Annabeth, and I follow Magnus through the cross-dimensional hole he cut out of thin air. Not the weirdest thing I’ve seen, but it’s definitely up there in like top 20.(yes, unfortunately I have seen A LOT of really weird things) Anyway, through the hole is a giant tree. The branches are the size of normal trees at least. We follow Magnus around the tree until Alex shoves him through a blob of light. Gods, Magnus really does scream like a little girl.
“See you in the other side,” Alex calls out as he jumps through the portal.
Annabeth follows suit, with me being last. I wasn’t going to take the risk that anything happened-I could tell I was the only one on guard. Once we got to the other side, we were in what looked to be a lobby.
“Magnus, good to see you,” a dude called out-his name tag said Hunding
“New Einherji?” This other guy named Helgi (I think that’s what he name tag says) asked
“Nope-they’re here to help with a quest” Alex says with a grin, “so they are going to need rooms.”
Alex and Magnus wander off-probably to the dinning hall.
“Just one, we’re not staying long” I quickly add.
“You smell like the sea, a room with lots of water?” I’m asked.
“That’s fine, can we hurry this up,” I snap. The faster we finish this, the faster me and Annabeth can go back to a normal life.(Well, as normal as we can get it life)
My reply is a glare from Helgi so I give him my wolf glare. He jumps.
“Where did you learn t-“
I cut him off “Lupa, mother of Rome-No I don’t give lessons. Now show us to our room”
“F-follow me.”
He leads us to an elevator, and pushes Floor 19. We get to the top and a bunch of weird looking people pop their heads out. I identify each of them from Annabeth’s stories, and asses their threat levels. He opens the door to a room. I gasp, it’s so me. (That makes me sound selfish-I’m not, I swear) There is water everywhere and it’s all beach themed.
“I’ll leave you to your room,” Helgi stutters out as he quickly leaves the room. Huh, guess I am scary after all. I jump into the pool to relax and am meet with the opposite. All of a sudden I can feel water EVERYWHERE. I can feel it in the air, miles away, and in people’s bodies. Oh no. This is bad. This is really bad.
“Percy are you okay?” Annabeth asks me. She also made her way into the pool.
“The water-I..I can feel it everywhere.” That was all I needed to say. She knew what I was thinking.
“I know you made that promise..down there.. but I think this is a sign from the Fates. You’re supposed to use these powers.” she replies.
“But-“
“Just be careful. Practice. Control them.”
“You always know what to say Wise Girl.” I smile. It’s going to be okay.
Please tell me about grammar issues, parts you do/don’t like, and ideas for a change /future chapters. Don‘t be afraid to be harsh-I want real feedback. I’ll try to post the next chapters soon.
CHANGES:Magnus only knows that Greek/Riman gods/demigods are real, and nothing else about them. Also the meeting in Ship of the Dead never happened
Prologue
*The world’s greatest hero and the Norse’s brave two,
Shall sail across the sea to pay a debt that is overdue.
To the ancient domain where the gods have no name,
The silver-tongued liar meets a new state,
And falls by the words of the tide’s bitter weight,
Beneath the command of the Storm-shaker’s fate.*
Chapter One:Magnus POV
“Why are we here again?” Alex asked me for like the hundredth time-okay maybe it was like 5 times-as we approached the Beacon Street Bridge.
“Annabeth contacted me about the prophecy and said we needed to meet up to talk about it-I suggested here.” I reply as the bridge comes into view. Learning over the bridge, I see my cousin Annabeth smiling at the water. She is as gorgeous as ever with her blonde curls and gray eyes, but she looks sad, as if something is bothering her.
“Annabeth!!” I call out to her.
Instantly, she looks up and grins “Magnus! Alex, good to see you!”
By now we have made it on to the bridge and are hugging.
She pulls away, “Gods you’ve gotten so tall!”
“Yeah, I guess I have.” I mutter followed by an eye roll from Alex.
“As much as I hate to interrupt your family reunion, didn’t we meet here for a reason?” Alex butts in.
“Yes-so why do you need to talk to me about the prophecy?” I ask Annabeth.
Her facial expression darkens “I know the last member you need for the quest.” She seems very upset about that-I wonder why.
“It’s you isn’t it!?” I cry out in realization, “Oh gods Annabeth, why does it have to be you?!? You deserve to relax! Aren’t you in college?!? Oh Gods! You’re the world’s greatest hero?!?”
“Actually, that would be me.” A voice calls out from behind me.
Chapter Two:Magnus POV
“Ahhhhh!” I scream, “Who are you?!?” I ask the newcomer. Oh Gods, he scares me-the way he RADIATES power. I also didn’t realize how HOT he was. He was tall, tan, and had lots of mussels. His jet black hair blew in the wind while his sea green eyes meet mine. There are so many other beautiful things about him, but Alex will totally kill me (literally) out of jealousy, so I’m stopping my description here. Although I’m sure he’s a god in disguise-even though he said otherwise.
“I’m Percy. Percy Jackson.” he replies.
“N-nice to meet you,” Alex and I stutter out at the same time. Gods he’s hot. Alex is gonna kill me for sure now.
“I know what you’re thinking, and no, I’m not a god in disguise. I’m a demigod, like you.” Percy states. I don’t like how he knows I’m a demigod, or that he knows what I’m thinking.
“How do you know that?” I ask him.
“Annabeth told me-all about your life actually. Said I need to know what I was getting myself into for once.” He replied with a weird tone in his voice I can’t read.
“And how would you know Annabeth?” Alex asked-finally joining our conversation.
“He’s my boyfriend-and has been my best friend since we were 12” Annabeth says with a grin. Percy leans down to kiss her-also with a grin on his face. Good. He better treat my cousin right, or else he’s gonna have to meet Jack the hard way.
“No offense or anything but EWWWWW!” Alex exclaims.
“Dude, do you have to be so rude?!” I retort back.
Percy breaks our argument before it gets too crazy, “It’s fine” he spits, “Look, are we going to continue talking here, or are we going to Valhalla? I suggest the latter because I’m pretty sure there are some baddies closing in on us.”
I don’t like his tone but I also feel like we’re being watched.
“Ugh, follow me” I reply as I crawl through a hole I just cut open on to the World Tree. Next stop, Valhalla.
This is a really good one with Percabeth & Magnus Chase https://m.fanfiction.net/s/14071822/1/
This is another popular good one called Falling For You-where Percy falls into Tartarus alone
Enjoy :)
Prophecy for my Fanfiction ahhh!! I’m in love with it!!(MCGA & Percy Jackson Crossover)
Updates as I write (might take a while sry)
“The world’s greatest hero and the Norse’s brave two,
Shall sail across the sea to pay a debt that is overdue.
To the ancient domain where the gods have no name,
The silver-tongued liar meets a new state,
And falls by the words of the tide’s bitter weight,
Beneath the command of the Storm-shaker’s fate.”
What do you think?!? Please give feedback as I want to make this as good as possible (what you do/don‘t like, grammar issues, etc-chapter one is written and I will post it soon-prob with chapter two :) (tomorrow 🤞)
Prophecy for my Fanfiction ahhh!! I’m in love with it!!(MCGA & Percy Jackson Crossover)
Updates as I write (might take a while sry)
“The world’s greatest hero and the Norse’s brave two,
Shall sail across the sea to pay a debt that is overdue.
To the ancient domain where the gods have no name,
The silver-tongued liar meets a new state,
And falls by the words of the tide’s bitter weight,
Beneath the command of the Storm-shaker’s fate.”
What do you think?!? Please give feedback as I want to make this as good as possible-chapter one is written and I will post it soon-prob with chapter two :) (tomorrow 🤞)