u/Danbaby_

I know the title might be a bit corny I’m only 3 pages in just wanting to hear what ppl think any tips or suggestions/critiques just ik the speech bubbles suck

I haven’t added dialogue to the second page yet. I’m just having a lot of trouble with the word bubbles and I think I’m gonna redo the first pages word bubbles cause I don’t think they look good. Just do you guys have any tips or suggestions I know that dialogue is super corny. I’ve never had to write dialogue before so I apologize.