
Would you read something that looks like this
Any advice is welcome

Any advice is welcome
Here’s some stuff I’ve done I’m more into drawing more action focused media like jjk other manga/comics so that’s most of my experience sorry to say I’m not really able to draw fursonas and I’m still practicing drawing women but if you have a cool character more close to what I draw I’m happy to draw it js know I’ll probably take a day or so to complete if I get started if you want it quicker, I’ll do it on paper but if you want it done digitally, it’ll take a little longer, so let me know
I know the title might be a bit corny I’m only 3 pages in just wanting to hear what ppl think any tips or suggestions/critiques just ik the speech bubbles suck
I haven’t added dialogue to the second page yet. I’m just having a lot of trouble with the word bubbles and I think I’m gonna redo the first pages word bubbles cause I don’t think they look good. Just do you guys have any tips or suggestions I know that dialogue is super corny. I’ve never had to write dialogue before so I apologize.