u/DannyDef

This is a small chunk of the comic I am working on! Any feedback would be much appreciated.

First off, thanks to the couple of people who helped out when I posted a couple of these pages a few months back. I used some of the comments and now I’m back with a nice little chunk of a project I’ve been working on.

It’s just a little rambling side story that a character tells, so it’s kind of meant to be long and winding, but any any feedback about the pages would be greatly appreciated!

Please ignore the different stages of the panels (I’m just trying different things) but as I’m putting everything together I’m not sure i’m doing a good job of giving a brief overview of this character’s backstory. I’m not sure if I need to be more liberal with the narration or just rearrange some panels or pages.

You guys were able to help when I originally posted some pages from this book back in October, so any feedback would be greatly appreciated.