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Please ignore the different stages of the panels (I’m just trying different things) but as I’m putting everything together I’m not sure i’m doing a good job of giving a brief overview of this character’s backstory. I’m not sure if I need to be more liberal with the narration or just rearrange some panels or pages.
You guys were able to help when I originally posted some pages from this book back in October, so any feedback would be greatly appreciated.
u/DannyDef — 17 days ago