u/DarkerNight_

Hello, I am a first time writer andI recently started to write chapters for a novel I have been conceptualizing for a long while now.
"A Billion to One" is the first chapter's name. The Novel is named "A Billion to None".

I plan to release this to Webnovel once I have stockpiled enough chapters for it.

I generally just want to know if the chapter is catching enough for you to want to read another chapter or if you see any shortcomings in the writing.

Any other advice is lovingly appreciated!

Thanks to everyone that helps me.