[QCrit] DELENDA, adult sci-fi, 115k (First Attempt)
Dear [name],
I am writing to seek representation for DELENDA, a 115,000-word adult science fiction novel with series potential. In 2121, the arrival of a cosmic artifact called the Unlimiter gave humanity the power to reverse climate disaster, extend lifespans, and build cities across the Solar System. Fifty-three years later, an alien enemy arrives to claim it. Set across an arcanotech-infused Solar System, DELENDA combines the civilization-scale conflict of THE MERCY OF GODS, the political and military tensions of SOME DESPERATE GLORY, and the archaeological space mystery of THE STARDUST GRAIL. [add something specific to agent if applicable]
Twenty-nine-year-old astrophysicist Carly Mulligan has been obsessed since youth with the search for intelligent alien life, hoping someone from beyond may understand humanity in a way it cannot understand itself. When she intercepts a deep space signal, she’s thrilled—only to discover a threat of annihilation. The alien leader offers humanity a choice: surrender the Unlimiter or face extinction.
Global leaders choose war, and Carly finds herself a mouthpiece for the powerful nation-bloc of Europa. Despite friction with diplomats and generals, she helps deceive the aliens, securing an initial victory. But the war quickly returns with a vengeance. To grasp what humanity is truly fighting, Carly must brave the darkness: first, an alien shipwreck, then the hostile dimension of the Abyss.
I have a BA in Mathematics from [university], where I also wrote and edited for humor magazine [humor magazine name]. This is my debut novel, inspired by a childhood love for planets, moons, and the search for extraterrestrial life. I currently live in [city, state].
Thank you sincerely for your time and consideration.
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