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u/Dil_Sidhu_Poetry
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Verse 1:-
We were happy without a reason,
What was the need for a treason,
Feelings were raw emotions intact,
Why can't you just, spit the facts,
Bridge:-
Tears are salty yet they melt snow,
Chorus:-
I couldn’t let go, even after letting go,
I’ve kept you somewhere, I don't even know,
Verse 2:-
The candle is burning in the day light,
I’ve come to terms, oh I’ve stopped the fight,
It’s a wait that shall never end, don't pretend,
Sometimes it’s better to stop the mend,
Bridge:-
Feeling like water it never stops to flow,
Chorus:-
I couldn’t let go even after letting go,
I’ve kept you somewhere, I don't even know,
Verse 3:-
Somethings are just better, not known,
What to do with the body, if soul is gone,
who said love is straight, it's loop,
Oh baby, I wasn't expecting this low stoop,
Bridge:-
The more you let go, oh baby it grow, it grow...
Chorus:-
I couldn’t let go even after letting go,
I’ve kept you somewhere, I don't even know,