r/IndieMusicFeedback

A song about a dead star whose light still reaches us, like someone who has already left without us knowing.

Hey everyone! I'm finishing up the final details of my first single, and since I've been working on it alone for so long, I'm looking for some external feedback.

I started singing 8 months ago and recorded all the instruments myself. I used to compose film music, so I incorporated that influence into my style. Any feedback would be greatly appreciated, whether it's about the mix, the performance, or the overall vibe!

(Also, this isn't the official cover art.)

Thanks everyone for your time!

https://soundcloud.com/black-napas/maximq22q-1

I’m working on a trip-hop album with a cyberpunk concept, and I’ve been experimenting with different elements. The other tracks have turned out pretty well, but I feel a bit stuck on this one.

For now, I’m thinking of adding a few more drum samples and playing around with the dynamics, but I can’t really think of what other instruments or sounds I should layer on top.

I’m especially stuck on the progression/arrangement. There’s a section in the middle where I basically just filled the space with noise because I couldn’t think of how to develop the track from there. It kind of feels like a placeholder right now.