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Alternative Rock/Post-punk track, going for some unpolished sounds to heavily contrast the many inhuman songs out there right now. Feedback very welcome (for this one and to take with me for the next track)
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Alternative Rock/Post-punk track, going for some unpolished sounds to heavily contrast the many inhuman songs out there right now. Feedback very welcome (for this one and to take with me for the next track)

This track has been on my harddrive for ages so I decided to finally finish it and publish. The first version was full of long winding guitar solos and went on for ages. I decided to compress it into a 3:40 minute track to make the individual variations shine more.

I really tried to keep the polish down. Not in the mix nescessarily but I did refrain from editing the raw recordings too much to kind of keep a realistic vibe all around the track.

I'm really curious for feedback because I'd like to continue down this road and evolve while still releasing track by track.

Thanks!

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u/Aardappelboom — 10 hours ago
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Tight ship/starboard WIP 0.1

Hi! This is À bit of an uninspired little test run of making a song that like follows the correct structure so to speak. Very rough, lots of vocal takes that just didnt end up working. I don’t really plan on working on this muxh further, and I sat on it for pretty long bc it’s not awesome but I think I could learn something from critique. feel free to be blunt lol i had a vision but it didn’t work this time. Im working on something else tn though that I think will turn out much better. Produced in reaper with vocals recorded shittily on bandlab

The last bit of dead air is supposed to be me repeating the verse at. A higher pitch but my voice just was not cooperating, and I only kept it in because I wanted to know how the outro sounded with everything in y’all’s opinion. I’d love any feedback from the composition to the lyrics to everything in between.

Specifically I really like the verses and then the “by god… pray to my god” part so I’d really like to know what yall thought of those sections since theure the only ones I really liked. Thanks for listening!

u/Hot-Lingonberry-6735 — 4 hours ago
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Ridgewell - Is this any good?

Hi everyone. I've been making music for a good while, but for this latest project I feel like I am really making some good stuff. Of course, I would, wouldn't I. People close to me also say it's good, but they also would, wouldn't they. So I thought I could get some honest feedback from people who don't know me or care about my feelings. Be brutal and honest please.

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u/YouHaveGod — 12 hours ago

"Flicker" - Piano/Vocal (Songwriter Demo)

I posted my first track here a couple days ago, my current production of "Flicker." It didn't have the vocal or melody and is not the fixed final production necessarily. This is the Piano/Vocal Demo. It's how all my songs have been written and their core form. I'm interested in songwriting at this point, I'm trying to get these songs to pitchable Demos for artists and sync. Also open to resonant collaborations and new/emerging/independent artists and producers/engineers as well. All productive feedback is welcome. I'm going to link the produced/muted vocal version I posted first in the comments. Grateful and inspired by this community already. Thanks in advance. :)

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u/AnAchingHope — 16 hours ago
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Psycho Dance

Befor the vocal recordin
This is probably the most hardcore track I’ve made so far. My favorite part starts around 1:20 — the way the song develops from there is something I’m really proud of. I’d love for you to give it a listen.

u/psychy_jpn — 1 day ago
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This is a music video I made for my song “Caprichoso”

The song is actually a one shot that I recorded with a loop pedal. I recorded it with a tascam field recorder lol.

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u/basslinekilla — 20 hours ago

Could you check the pronunciation in my English song?

I’m not a native English speaker. I’ve always admired English-speaking rock bands, and I’d like to start writing and releasing songs in English in the future.
I’d really appreciate it if you could evaluate my English pronunciation and let me know whether it’s at a level where I can confidently release it as music.
I already know it isn’t perfect, and I’m not expecting it to be. What I’d really like to know is how it sounds to a native speaker. Is it so difficult to understand that it becomes distracting? Or is it good enough that I can keep improving as I continue making music?
Please don’t worry about being too harsh—I genuinely want your honest opinion. If you think I should spend more time studying English pronunciation before releasing more songs, I’d rather hear that than receive empty praise.

u/psychy_jpn — 1 day ago

Feedback on upcoming song from an album we’ve been working on

Any feedback would be appreciated!! If interested in the file name, the song is called Lover’s Plea, and the j4 is just for July 4th to help keep track of my files. We have made around 10 songs so far, and I would love feedback on this recent one I am trying to finish. Thanks so much!!

u/Lively0 — 1 day ago
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Waters Light Blue - Almos Lataan

Here is a new song I wrote. Falling under Sadcore I think, although it is slow, no percussion, and has some contrasting, more uplifting sections. I've been trying to balance light and dark elements. Synth based, and later some strings. Dealing with sea theme, separation, so similar to one of my previous songs. Also, calming nature video with this one that I shot on a local walk in Switzerland.

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Any feedback welcome.

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u/AlmosLataan — 1 day ago
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GIUNO - Never Yours

I wrote this song about the myth of Apollo and Daphne, trying to interpret both characters by using a different pitch. Not the greatest singer but I tried my best.

The lyrics focus on the chasing scene.

Made with Bandlab and played with a harpika.

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u/nocturnia94 — 3 days ago
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Rat Race

Finally produced something myself (well my mate did bass) that is getting to where I’d like it to be.

Can you spot the Spice Girls reference? 🦻👀

u/aSmartWittyName — 2 days ago

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u/Feisty_Noise886 — 2 days ago