u/Diligent-Manager-531

I'm seeking external answers as to how I can make a story game or more specifically the story itself feel timeless, almost like an addiction of some sort. Something that you can play more than once and never get tired of it.

I've written short stories as an exercise to help develop my vocabulary and punctuation to enhance story telling. However, I feel like they lack something. That addiction to read it more and more.

Kinda just looking for answers, seeing what people come up with.