u/Disastrous-Spite1765

Hi, I plan to apply to medical school this cycle and am looking for extra help. I used Fiverr to help write my personal statement, but it still lacks the overall grab of attention/personality I'm looking for, and it still feels a bit like a brain-dumb jump around. I am wondering if anyone on here would be willing to look over my personal statement, give some advice or tips on how I can improve it further/ if what I have also gives you the feeling that it is giving me of "hmmm kinda feel like something is missing/ not lining up" open to dm commincations. hoping to find someone who is applying, has applied, or is knowledgeable on the premed personal statements! willing to communicate pay as well!