u/Dismal-Cream-9292

Hello everyone! Thank you for reading. This is an early draft of the prologue chapter in my debut novel called "The Eschaton Chronicles". I finished it a few days ago and I wanted to get some other opinions from writers on what they thought about it. This is my first time like sitting and writing seriously so I understand it's probably not perfect. But any feedback is appreciated and thank you once again.

Prologue Link - here's the link.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/138HqC-ToEbsia0VWCjZzf-z9OuLoKaUmmS9-ipDOQ-g/edit?usp=sharing

Hello, I am an aspiring author. Today I spent a rigorous amount of hours in order to write the prologue of my urban fantasy debut novel. It was very mentally draining, but I am proud of the fact that I was able to spend so much time writing. My problem now is that I think it's shit, more specifically, lacks potential to be published or good. I am not the first to have these thoughts but any thoughts, good or bad, would be helpful in knowing where I stand. I have no writer friends so this is really the only place where I can get thoughts of other writers, at least for free. FAIR WARNING: The prologue isn't finished and I haven't done any spelling/grammar checks.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/138HqC-ToEbsia0VWCjZzf-z9OuLoKaUmmS9-ipDOQ-g/edit?usp=sharing