My First Song : Phool Khila Hai (lyrics)
Guys i have written a song and i want you to give feedback and next steps for it.
Theme of the song: A boy's journey from the first moment he sees a girl, to finding peace in her presence, to dreaming of a future with her.
//Chorus
Mere dil mai phool khila hai,
Jab mujhse tu mila hai;
Iss pyaar ke raaste pe,
Ab mera dil chala hai.
//Paragraph 1
Pehli baar dikhi jab tu,
Khil uthi tab meri rooh;
Waqt bhi jaise tham sa gaya,
Bas reh gaya tera sukoon;
Teri baaton mai ik raahat hai,
Aakhon main jo daavat hai;
Jab paas aati hai tu mere,
Tab hoti dil pe barkat hai.
//Chorus
Mere dil mai phool khila hai,
Jab mujhse tu mila hai;
Iss pyaar ke raaste pe,
Ab mera dil chala hai.
//Paragraph 2
Ab har din tera lagne laga,
Har khwaab tera sajne laga;
Tere saath jo pal milte hain,
Dil unmein hi basne laga....
Ab bas itni si khwahish hai,
Tu har lamhe ki baarish hai,
Rabb se jo bhi maangu main,
Bas tu hi meri guzaarish hai.
//Chorus(twice)
Mere dil mai phool khila hai,
Jab mujhse tu mila hai;
Iss pyaar ke raaste pe,
Ab mera dil chala hai.
How to play on Guitar-->
Capo: 3rd Fret
Chords Used: G – D – Em – C
Chorus Strumming: D UDUD UDUD DU
Verse Strumming: D UUD UUD DU