Hello all! My first post here. I'm looking for one beta reader to review my manuscript.
In the shadow of fallen empires and dispassionate Gods, Athos must face the question that ruined the heroes before him: what do I want?
Living under the thumb of a technocratic imperial hegemony. Athos survives by ferrying travelers and hauling supplies across the Vastum desert.
But when raiders ambush his caravan, a stranger intervenes, bestowing him a mysterious covenant.
Athos now embarks to uncover the truth behind his covenant. A path that will drag him to the scarring event that shattered the continent.
Feedback:
- Are you entertained? Do you want to keep reading?
- General feedback.
- Anything stand out, both good and bad?
- We can focus on the first 10k words then go from there.
Happy to swap in return.