[Complete] [33K] [YA Fantasy, Light Novel] KINGS CROWN
Hi Everyone!
I have just completed a 33,000-word Fantasy Light novel, hoping to do 1 or 2 more edits before officially finalizing it but would like to get a small number of beta readers before doing so.
This is meant to read short and sweet. Fantasy, anime-esque reading that focuses on rapid story movement and action.
I would love any and all feedback!
Here's my blub. DM me if you're interested!
"The Seventh Battalion has always held the line.
They were Merci’s strongest force, the ones sent where the fighting was worst, the ones who always came back.
Until now.
The enemy came prepared. The southern lands are already dying, and now even Merci’s strongest soldiers are being pushed to their limit.
The Seventh is running out of time.
And the one thing that could have changed everything… is gone.
The King's Crown, a powerful relic used by Kings to command their armies, turning chaos into strategy and battles into victories, has disappeared.
Fortis is running out of excuses.
He’s barely a soldier.
No talent for war.
And no idea what he’s doing.
Unfortunately, war doesn’t care about that.
So he has to make a choice:
Keep following orders—
or start giving them.
Because in a war like this,
You don’t get to be ready.
You just have to become what the moment demands."