u/Dreamhopperss

I joined this community a few days back and have been bringing many of your poetry and writings ever since. They were all so beautiful and I could see a lot of you putting your emotions behind it. It made me inspired to write something too. Sadly I couldn't due to exams and stuff but to not let this motivation to write and attempt to make you all feel something, the same way that I did, I wish to post something that I wrote a while back. And this is my first ever post on reddit 😭. Hope you'd like it.

P.S: These are two versions of the same poem. Which one makes you feel something?