Shayari on limerance by me
Malaal: regret
Khata: mistake
Arso se: from ages
Bhanwar: whirlpool
What is your opinion on this shayari? What score would you give to this shayari out of 10?
u/Due_Dare_9626 — 4 days ago
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A shayari on limerance by me:
Mera dil teri soorat ka deewana hai arso se,
Mere khwaab teri hi kahani hai arso se,
Ki tu samne thi aur mai baat nahi kar paaya,
Bas yahi ek malaal hai arso se,
Tera khayaal ek din barbaad karega muje,
Ye bhi maalum hai arso se,
Fir bhi tuje bhula nahi paya, Ye khata hai arso se,
Ye khayalo ke bhanwar me fasa hu arso se,
Inse azaad kese hona hai, ye sawaal hai arso se.
Malaal: regret
Khata: mistake
Arso se: from ages
Bhanwar: whirlpool
What is your opinion on this shayari? What score would you give to this shayari out of 10?
u/Due_Dare_9626 — 25 days ago