u/East-Comparison4686

Hi just wondering if someone can help me with a book I’m writing for fun. I just got back into writing for fun. I’m great at poetry . I used to write short books when I was a kid. Now I’m just seeing what I got lol. Anyways so I’m writing a short story and I guess I’m wondering how do I create a long story out of a a short thought that’s actually fills pages ..without having a boring first person narrated book if you get what I mean..
Here’s the story I’m open to all critiques