u/Elmothegod9

So I’ve had this idea for a bit where I wanted to write my own version of shield hero that is a much more mature (ik original) take on it. In this universe instead of four Japanese men being picked across different universes. Instead it would be two Japanese men and two American men. The Japanese men would be Naofumi and Motoyatsu and their characters would start out the same but change differently from the original. The American men would be two completely different characters from the other two hero’s. One would be a young but experience Marine, and the other would be a bit younger character who I honestly haven’t focused on yet. The marine character is very important to the story, he is basically a second main character to the story. The main issue for the characters will be kinda the same, might go into the waves or make up my own villains. The world will also not play like a rpg but instead more like a fantasy world, like Frieren, but most of the fighting will be straight hand on hand (or blade) battles. Some general changes to the story are one, I want Myne to not be evil (again, so original), but instead be a confused person with a bad look on the world and people due to her royalty. I also want to HEAVILY change Raphtalia. Instead she’ll be already grown, so no slave stuff. I want her to be a mercenary kinda of character when introduced, so that Naofumi is paying her to be his comrade in battle at first, then they make a friendship that leads to her becoming apart of the party for the rest of the series. I also want her to start off kinda of a dick to Naofumi (backstory) due to her also bad look on the world, but then warming up to him and seeing him more like a brother. Yeah I’m not doing the ship, it feels wrong but I ain’t got nothing against you if you like it. Overall that’s my little fan fiction I might write, it would be nice to hear some suggestions and if I should do it.