u/Eloquenttrash

[Complete] [48000] [Fantasy] Towerborn

Hello,

Open to a beta swap for my fantasy novel Towerborn.

Here is the information and first page is here.

Let me know if you have a manuscript you’d like to trade for (ideally fantasy but also into sci-fi, urban fantasy, and some horror). Equal length preferred but if it’s a little longer that’s fine, too!

It’s a self contained story that is the first in a six-book series (of which I’m almost done Book 2 and pieces of Book 3, which are both on track for around 80,000 each) that scales up in scope and length.

A boy sold into slavery and a girl locked in a tower both learn the same truth: compassion has a cost. 48k MG/YA crossover fantasy. Looking for beta readers who enjoy character‑driven stories, political undercurrents, and morally complex antagonists. Themes of agency, survival, and the quiet ways children resist the systems built to contain them.

• Length: 48,000 words • Genre: Upper MG / lower YA fantasy • Tone: Dark‑but‑hopeful, character‑driven, political undercurrents • Content notes: Slavery, violence (non‑graphic), child endangerment, grief • What I need: Big‑picture feedback (pacing, clarity, character arcs) • What I don’t need: Line edits (manuscript is clean) • Delivery: Google Docs

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u/Eloquenttrash — 5 days ago

Hi, just wanted to share my book series opening chapters (who I’ve condensed here for simplicity)

Link

Would you keep reading?

Crit # 1 (1,714)

Crit # 2 (2050)

Going through more and I’ll post them as I get through them. Apologies for the length of my post, first time here (despite reading the rules).

Thanks for checking it out.

u/Eloquenttrash — 17 days ago