u/Embermyst

This is my newest 1st chapter for my book Diamond Wife. This PDF is of my new rehashing of it, and I'm hoping that it's much better than before. It's all pretty much brand new and ended up as two chapters, so I had to split them. If you are interested, please read and share your feedback on whether or not it's good writing, if it is of interest, and why.

Just as it says, I'm trying Patreon to attempt to rehash my book to see if, by letting out a portion of my book for free, then I might be able to garner some interest. But I'm not getting much traction, and it's been over a month. Is this to be expected? Am I just running into another rabbit hole? I thought about posting a chapter in one of the subreddits, but I'm not sure which one to do that in order to know if there would be any interest in the story.

Ahhh, being willfully deaf has never been so pleasing...