u/EquivalentCap6271

Hey everyone, first time posting here.

I made this track with Suno and built a full lyric video around it.

The song is in Japanese, with Korean translation on screen, so I’m especially curious how it feels to people who don’t speak either language.

I’m not just looking for “nice song” comments — I’d really appreciate honest feedback on:

1. Does the track hold your attention?
2. Do the visuals help the song, or do they feel too busy?
3. Does the mood come through even without English subtitles?
4. Are there any obvious Suno artifacts or mix issues?
5. Would adding English subtitles make a big difference?

The style I was aiming for was a cool, social-exhaustion kind of J-pop / neo-soul mood.

Video:

Kuuki Yoi

Happy to return feedback if you share something you’re working on too.