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I was reading India: 5,000 Years of History on the Subcontinent by Audrey Truschke, and honestly, something feels very off in the way the author has written this book, so I decided to stop reading it. There are very poor word choices, omissions of anthropological context, and a lack of nuance.

I am not a believer, but a rationalist and a strong critic of all religions and nationalist political ideology in India. But when I am trying to read an academic history book, I expect it to maintain unbiased language and a quality narrative. This is the first time a claimed academic history book has felt this off-putting to me.

Especially on page 27 (screenshot above), the author implies that since the voices in Vedic texts are male, with extra emphasis on "young," that is why we find creative sexual elements such as those at the end of the horse sacrifices. Really? Did she ever consider the life expectancy of people at that time? Or why omit the fact that, like many early societies, they believed in fertility rituals and engaged in various practices out of ignorance?

The author is deliberately using loaded phrasing for sensationalism. It is anachronistic in its use of language.

The author then goes on to say the Vedas describe "incestuous rape" in graphic terms, without giving the context that the act is treated as a breach of cosmic and social order in the Vedas, and that other gods react negatively and Rudra attacks Prajāpati. Without this context, a casual reader is being misled. Sure, there are mentions of rape, incest, and other forms of sexual violence in ancient literature that reflect the people of the time, but there are many ways to narrate such a story if your objective is factual history.

Moreover, the author clearly does not know the difference between "polygamy" and "polygyny." The Vedas mention polygyny, not polygamy. Again, the lack of an anthropological worldview is clearly evident.

Even the map she includes at the beginning of the book, titled "India ca. 2500 BCE," labels South India as "Karnataka" (Screenshot 2).

I believe an important quality of a good history or social science scholar is empathy, in addition to intellectual curiosity. The author is clearly lacking this.

If the author's primary objective is to examine discrimination and marginalization, which is a valid goal, then the title feels like a bait and switch. A title like A History of Social Stratification in India would better reflect the book's actual tone and focus.

To me, it reads more as political and social commentary than as an academic work. If you are writing a book to criticize, as polemic, or as commentary, then it is fine to use that kind of language and to omit some nuance in service of a political argument or activism. But if you present yourself as a serious academic, I believe restraint is the better path. As a broader principle, if one does not appreciate or admire the subject of one's scholarship, it is worth asking why one pursues that field at all.