Divine Dungeon series - Does it get better?
I'm about 5 hours into the first book, and it's rough. Passive voice in the extreme, tense shifts mid-paragraph, a greater density of adjectives than one per sentence, and the MC speaks like a 10 year old. Though that may be the narrator inserting exclamation points every other sentence, both dialogue and narration.
u/Expert_Cricket2183 — 10 days ago