u/Express_Corgi_6525

Here I can write whatever
Amazing or not, don't matter
Just for a while here, let myself be free
And what will unveil I'm yet to see

Don't need be deep,
Don't need be profound
Just keep flowing,
Playing with sound

No pressure, but I keep wondering
How can I capture the beauty 'round me?
This sight, you see, is very simple
Maybe something similar can be seen through your window

But every moment, unique in time
Every sight, quickly passing by
I'll never see the same sky
Nor the same birds flying by

Those orange rays puncturing through clouds
Or the kids and the playfulness that surrounds
The pleasant structure of the sunbathed buildings
Or the wind that the trees are amusing

All life around is invaluable
The amount of complexity, incalculable
These mundane moments we should treasure
For it's rarity we cannot measure

Well, that's all that ran through my mind
Maybe next time better inspiration I'll find

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through the flow of time, I drift
constantly carried, motionless
all around, meaningless
a freezing cold, is the fact's gift

suddenly from inside,
comes a feeling I cannot subside
crimson colored warmth
brings everything to life.
countless flower fields fill
what was only void until
an otherwordly force
capable of all and more

it compels me to open my eyes
to then meet hers
from it joy and gratitude arise,
my soul complete comes
her touch confirms she’s real,
my happiness I cannot conceal
our connection, I can feel
truer than anything, any wound can heal

we hold each other, all pain fades
“I hope you can find me there”, she says
my heart skips a beat.

awake, now I see only the grey ceiling
desperately search for remnants of that feeling;
like an starving animal after rests of an all-satiating dish
I do so, since for any substance in my life is what i wish.

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I'm very new to the world of poetry, any feedback would be highly appreciated.

through the flow of time, I drift
constantly carried, motionless
all around, meaningless
a freezing cold, is the fact's gift

suddenly from inside,
comes a feeling I cannot subside
crimson colored warmth
brings everything to life.
countless flower fields fill
what was only void until
an otherwordly force
capable of all and more

it compels me to open my eyes
to then meet hers
from it joy and gratitude arise,
my soul complete comes
her touch confirms she’s real,
my happiness I cannot conceal
our connection, I can feel
truer than anything, any wound can heal

we hold each other, all pain fades
“I hope you can find me there”, she says
my heart skips a beat.

awake, now I see only the grey ceiling
desperately search for remnants of that feeling;
like an starving animal after rests of an all-satiating dish
I do so, since for any substance in my life is what i wish.

1
2

I'm very new to the world of poetry, any feedback would be highly appreciated.

Through the flow of time, I drift;
Constantly carried, motionless;
All around, meaningless;
A freezing cold, is the fact's gift

Suddenly from inside,
Comes a feeling I cannot subside;
Crimson colored warmth
Brings everything to life.
Countless flower fields fill
What was only void until;
An otherwordly force
Capable of all and more.

It compels me to open my eyes
To then meet hers;
From it joy and gratitude arise,
My soul complete comes;
Her touch confirms she’s real;
My happiness I cannot conceal;
Our connection, I can feel,
Truer than anything, any wound can heal.

We hold each other, all pain fades
“I hope you can find me there”, she says
My heart skips a beat.

Awake, now I see only the grey ceiling
Desperately search for remnants of that feeling.
Like an starving animal after rests of an all-satiating dish
I do so, since for any substance in my life is what I wish.

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2