u/FNG_Salty

I've been trying to fry scream for about 2 weeks now and got this just before I hopped in the shower so thought id upload and ask for some more advice. You can see how ive progressed from my other video on my profile

So ive been trying for the past 3 days to get my first "fry scream sound" and was wondering if this is close and if it is where can I take it from here and if its not, what can I do to improve it.