Need honest opinions on my original dark fantasy/action comic idea
Hey, I’m working on an original comic/manga-inspired story and I want honest feedback
The story is set in a world where civilization has advanced expeditiously and planets from all over the galaxy collaborate with each other, fighting tournaments are a tradition across the whole galaxy hosted to test the power of individuals to simply see who is the strongest, these tournaments are actually use to fuel a place outside space and time to seal it, called the void where powerful beings called monsters roam there. Commonly the void creates leaks which are rifts that connect the void and the outside world where monsters can come out and feed on people. A secret organization contains the leaks who sends people called plasterers to close leaks and kill any monsters that come out of them
There is a lot more to story but that's just a simple summary of what the story is about and how it's the center piece of everything that happens
My questions:
Does this concept sound interesting or too generic?
What part stands out most
What clichés or red flags should I avoid?
What could I change or add to make it more appealing
If u want to hear more about the story, characters or power system you can dm me
Be brutally honest—I’m trying to build something real.