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Man Over the Abyss

A brown tribe destroyed another tribe,
A red beast devoured the human mind.
From the Rhine to the Volga's shore,
Rolled the waves of endless war.

Science and rational thought astray,
Lost their path—and death found way.
Blood-soaked earth beneath the sky
Shapes the truths by which we live and die.

"Never again!" in terror they cried,
Those words in stone were carved with pride.
Power accumulated in every hand,
A nuclear winter threatened the land.

"One small step for man, one giant leap for mankind,"
A foot touched heaven's sphere—words grandly defined.
The table was like a royal feast,
Blue jeans brought the fruits of progress.

The twentieth century reached its end,
Someone raised a glass with cheerful friends.
Too much had happened unto man,
The next age waited just ahead.

Impact! Babel's tower burned in flame,
At the twenty-first century's dawn it came.
Burning, screaming, innocent lives,
God and Satan mingled in the night.

Artemis circles the Moon on high,
While someone screams where the drones strike.
Human power—where lies its bound?
Will a dreadful ending yet be found?

He shall perish when he turns away,
From God, and from His righteous way.
Unless he learns what good and evil are,
And follows truth instead of war.

He will burn in the fire he lit,
Consumed by flames arising from it.
Unless he thanks the One above,
Who fashioned him in wisdom and love.

Created in His image bright,
And given a purpose, clear and right:
To live and love one another well,
And praise the Creator at morning's bell.

Human blood is sacred still,
Beyond the shore of cunning ill.
Is this age the final one?
The golden question must be asked by everyone.

Across a rope above the abyss walks man,
One step aside—and down he falls again.
The twenty-first century shall mark the line:
Back into dust—or to Proxima Centauri's shine.

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u/Firm_Assumption_6757 — 10 days ago

Brotherhood

"An evil spirit thrives among mankind,
A dark-possessed hand struck fierce and blind.
"Man crossed the line no soul should cross,
Bright heavens dimmed in shadowed loss.

Blood runs across the cursed earth’s face,
Yet He opposed it through His grace:
“Love one another” — through ages it rings,
They nailed Him to the cross for the truth that He brings.

The truest words the Son of Man once gave,
That is why God still shines and saves.
The sun breaks bright through storm and night,
Christ sowed life where there was no light.

Love burns deep in the human heart,
While evil screams as flames tear it apart.
Love spins the planets through the skies,
Calls us to shield our own when danger rises.

What is pure, sincere, and true,
Let it burn bright and be defended too.
Love — the force above all powers untold,
Brother shields brother, brave and bold.

The sun still shines, the rain will fall,
Doves softly murmur, summer blooms for all."

The sun came out together with a brief, unexpected rain shower just as I was finishing the poem, so I added the last two lines 😄

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u/Firm_Assumption_6757 — 18 days ago

Adrenaline under control

Siren in the city of peace,
Howled through the streets without release.
Phone alarm screaming its warning cry —
The Rubicon burns beneath the sky.

They are coming, they destroy,
Flooding the streets with blood and noise.
Homeland battalions mobilize fast —
You are trapped now, the die is cast.

Your hands are shaking — what to do?
Still so young… must death claim you?
Eyes shut tight — the hormones ignite,
Your lungs drink war through the burning night.

Adrenaline bends beneath your command,
Fire awakens within your hand.
Your element now — the raging storm.
One crushing strike with all your force!

Lithuanian (original) translation:

Sirena ramybės mieste,

Užkaukė visu garsu staiga.

Aliarmas telefono - žinia,

Rubikono linija - ugnyje.

Jie ateina, jie naikina,

Krauju gatves jau skandina!

Mobilizuojas tėvynės pulkai -

Tu įstrigęs, čia nėra juokai.

Rankos dreba - ką daryt?

Tu dar jaunas... negi mirt?

Užsimerki - jauti hormoną,

Plaučiai geria karo orą.

Suvaldytas adrenalinas,

Tavo kumštis - ugninis.

Tavo stichija - audra.

Smūgis visa jėga!

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u/Firm_Assumption_6757 — 18 days ago

Bright God

He dances, he sings in the blossoming air,
Flowers awaken, green life everywhere.
His feet touch the earth with a radiant gleam,
Life rushes forward like a powerful stream.

Young maidens around him are dancing in light,
The green forest echoes with laughter so bright.
A stage full of sunlight in heavenly glare —
No siren of terror can trouble us there.

Death, fear, and suffering fade through the night,
They wander like shadows escaping the light.
Dark stars in the heavens above us still glow —
A moment in chaos, astonishingly so.

He dances, he sings as he burns through the world,
Through storms of existence his fire is unfurled.
A dark living shadow in sunlight’s bright glow
Plays games with the tempest of life down below.

The universe — dreadful and wondrous to see,
Say “Yes” unto life, if your spirit is free.
He flies upon white wings through thunderous skies,
With golden-bright sandals that flash like the skies.

From pale holy hands he scatters white flowers,
Filled with ecstasy, terror, and powers.
Whatever he touches grows fertile and strong,
Children’s laughter flows through the fields in song.

A noble soul prays to his glorious flame —
A radiant God is the sound of his name.
The music of spheres through the cosmos was cast,
And the soul in the darkness was questioned at last:

“Will you dance here beside me anew,
With death shining bright in the circle of stars blue?”

Lithuanian (original) translation:

Jis šoka, jis dainuoja,

Gėlės žydi, viskas žaliuoja.

Jo pėdos liečia žemę,

Gyvybė veržiasi į versmę.

Jaunos merginos aplink jį šoka,

Žalias miškas juoku alsuoja.

Saulės apšviesta scena -

Mums nebaisi jokia sirena.

Mirtis, baimė ir kančia,

Eina ir praeina nakčia.

Žvaigždės tamsiam danguj -

Akimirka chaose - taip gražu.

Jis šoka, jis dainuoja,

Jis per pasaulį liepsnoja.

Tamsus šešėlis Saulės šviesoj

Žaidžia gyvenimo audroj.

Visata - baisi ir graži,

Tark gyvenimui "Taip!" - jei gali.

Jis lekia su baltais sparnais,

Auksiniais sandalais lyg žaibais.

Beria iš baltų rankų gėles -

Siaubo ir ekstazės kupinas.

Viską, ką jis liečia - veši, auga,

Vaikų juokas liejasi per lauką.

Meldžiasi jam taurus žmogus -

Jis Dievas šviesus ir kilnus.

Sferų muzika Visatoj įausta,

Siela tamsoje buvo paklausta -

"Ar šoksi su manimi kartu,

Mirčiai žibant po žvaigždžių ratu?"

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u/Firm_Assumption_6757 — 21 days ago

The Last Hundred Days

Intoxication, sweet intoxication,
One taste begins your transformation.
In desert sands a hidden spring would flow,
You drank — and felt your burning spirit glow.

Brother Thomas slowly sips the wine,
The desert blooms in colors warm, divine.
The angels laugh and sing above the fire,
A hundred days breathe dance and wild desire.

We danced to silly songs through drunken air,
Sang “Negerai” like nothing else was there.
In circles turning to a single beat,
While vodka warmed the frozen midnight street.

Ah, her smiling lips, her half-closed shining eyes —
We sang with hope beneath the darkened skies.
The world broke open from those narrow rooms,
A friend passed me my first intoxicating fumes.

“Don’t be angry — all of us are drifting high!
Don’t be angry — we are eighteen, you and I.
We’ll dance beneath the pale and sleepless moon,
Then part along different roads too soon.”

And that was truth to me beneath the stars above —
How beautiful those nights of youth and love.

In Lithuania we have a tradition to make a party when the last hundred days are left to the end of high school. This is my memories.

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u/Firm_Assumption_6757 — 24 days ago

Save The World

They bind your hands before my weary eyes,
While laughter through the cursed darkness flies:
“Who’ll take his place? Who’ll suffer in his stead?” —
Their mocking voices circle ’round the dead.

“I will!” — my hand ascends into the light,
We trade our fates before the heavens bright.
O Sun, now hear my fearless spirit’s call:
Save one lone soul — and you shall save us all.

Lithuanian (original) translation:

Jie riša rankas tavo,

Prieš baltas akis mano.

"Ar kas nori į jo vietą?" -

Juokiasi tamsią šitą dieną.

"Aš!" - pakeliu ranką aukštai,

Keičiamės vietomis, matai.

Išgirsk mano narsų žodį, o Saule! -

Išgelbėk žmogų ir išgelbėsi Pasaulį.

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u/Firm_Assumption_6757 — 25 days ago

Lumps of meat

Lumps of meat, mere lumps of meat —
This is what became of her.
Revolution eats its young,
Wisdom dies on every tongue.

Femme fatale was born one night,
Something twisted out of sight.
“Show your legs now, honey sweet,
Come here, bunny — feel the heat.
Let us play forbidden games,
You were built for such dark aims.”

She kept dancing through the years,
Laughing over hidden tears.
Used and broken, left to rot —
Love was absent, cold was not.

Lust burned deep in hungry eyes,
Every promise dressed in lies.
“I will be adored someday,
Like a lovely dove,” she'd say.

Femme fatale now haunts the sky,
Falcons circle, hunting high.
Not her glance that shatters matter —
Breasts and bottom make minds scatter.

Lumps of meat she has become,
Burning bright till all is done.
“Show the world how hot you are!”
Another lover, another scar.

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u/Firm_Assumption_6757 — 30 days ago

God's image

The night spread out across the town:
“Die now — or march where shells rain down!”
A barcode sears into my skin,
My organs sold when death sets in.

Driven onward, blind like beasts,
Forward rush the slave-made fleets.
One gun shared among us three —
Will death tonight come hunting me?

Forced against my blood and brothers,
I fall in trenches drowned by slaughter.
My shaking hand shields half my face —
Explosions roar and shake the place.

They rip the liver from the slain,
Throw it in sacks without a name.
He forges profit out of gore,
Till one round splits his skull in war.

Behold this earth devoid of skies,
Behold man’s responsibility and lies.
Is man God’s image — bright and free?
They do not believe. They’ll harvest me.

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u/Firm_Assumption_6757 — 1 month ago

Once they were warriors, strong and brave,
Now they lie buried in a grave.
From West or East—it mattered not,
All rest beneath one common plot.

But people changed—the shift began,
The beast arose inside of man.
No buried soldiers there remain—
Beneath one slab of stone—now vain.

Someone committed a deed so grim,
“That one’s a beast!” they said of him.
They would not lay him with the rest—
Beyond the fence, he’s dispossessed.

When he chose evil, crossed the line,
He stepped beyond the human sign.
He tasted sweetness, dark and deep—
What hidden urges wake from sleep.

The chains fell loose, the scarecrows stirred,
What once was bound became uncurbed.
The laws collapsed, they could not stand—
And devils raged across the land.

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u/Firm_Assumption_6757 — 1 month ago

ChatGPT (about the poem): It is a text about a civilization that, having declared itself God, has lost the human being.

Deceive and steal,
Take all, then laugh your fill.
From weaker man you take—
There’s nothing fine at stake.

A blackened maw devours,
It swallows justice, ours.
What once by God was made—
Now breathes of judgment laid.

The golden columns fall—
Are these inventions ours?
The water and the light
Were built in former hours.

Debauchery proclaimed,
And drugs now named.
A hollow culture stands,
With demons in its plans.

The possessed—draw and see;
O God, stand close to me.
Among the shining fronts,
Among “freedom’s” parades.

Freedom has reached its height,
And man is brought to light:
A two-legged hungry beast—
No Renaissance, at least.

She smiles from every screen,
She tries to make me keen;
But I am filled with gloom—
No smile in me finds room.

My smile is bent and strained,
As I walk chained, contained.
She forces me, each day,
To please myself her way.

Something is rotten, known,
Within the Danish throne.
“Rejoice in screens of light!”—
They glitter, cold and bright.

A cat mews love aloud—
Her lovers form a crowd.
They gather, stand in line—
As if for something fine.

God has been replaced by “I”,
God to Satan—a mere guise.
No infants left, no youth—
Facades collapse to truth.

Graves will replace the view—
The end comes breaking through.

Lithuanian (original, stronger) translation:

Apgaut ir apvokt,

Prisiplėšt ir pasijuokt.

Iš silpno žmogaus -

Nieko tame gražaus.

Juoda ryklė ryja,

Teisingumą praryja.

Nukaltą Dieviška raide -

Ateitis alsuoja bausme.

Auksinės kolonos byra -

Ar išradimai mūsų yra?

Vandentiekis ir elektra -

Kūrė ankstesnė karta.

Lytinis pasileidimas,

Narkotikų išradimas.

Golumas kultūroj,

Demonai struktūroj.

Apsėstųjų - nors semk,

Dieve, mano petį remk.

Tarp blizgančių fasadų,

Tarp "laisvės" paradų.

Laisvė pasiekė epogėjų,

Ir žmogus išryškėjo:

Dvikojis alkanas žvėris -

Tai ne Renesanso mintis.

Ji šypsosi kiekvienam ekrane,

Nori pralinksminti mane.

Bet aš giliai liūdžiu -

Todėl šypsotis negaliu.

Mano šypsena kreiva,

Kai einu koja į koją su ja.

Ji verčia mane,

Džiuginti save.

Kažkas papuvę karalystėj danų,

Pasilinksmink šviesoj ekranų!

Kniaukia katė apie meilę -

Jos vaikinai stoja į eilę.

Dievą pakeitė "Aš",

Dievas Šėtonui - fas!

Ir nėra kūdikių ir vaikų -

Grius fasadai. Bus kapų.

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u/Firm_Assumption_6757 — 1 month ago

A machine gun rests, his comrades near,
He fights in trenches, soaked in fear.
Phalanxes fall — the siege draws tight,
“Value each day,” — his wisdom in the fight.

Lithuanian (original) translation:

Kulkosvaidis ir draugai šalia,

Jis ginasi šlapiam apkasų purve.

Falangai krenta - veržias apsuptis,

"Vertink kiekvieną dieną" - jo išmintis.

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u/Firm_Assumption_6757 — 1 month ago

A rose through thorns has forced its way,
Cruel hands once tore—yet failed to sway.
The hope of millions burst in bloom,
Freedom reached its brightest noon.

What is their bread from day to day?
A kingly feast on every tray.
They rubbed Freedom’s coin within their hand,
Till Liberty’s face could barely stand.

They sweetened, drugged their lavish taste—
“Too much weight!”—they feared the waist.
For heaviness they can’t allow,
It clashes with what’s “sexy” now.

“Fantastic!”—in the garden cried,
With drunken throat and goblet wide.
She thrived within the pool’s embrace—
But Fortune’s a whore, a fickle face.

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u/Firm_Assumption_6757 — 1 month ago