u/Free_Sorbet318

A Song To A Peaceful Person

The sun loved me once.
Its glow, warm like a hug,
Left me content - 
Not a pain in the world.

I was in a rattan chair;
The wind kissed my face
Its fleeting presence a relief
and for a moment, it loved me back.

To my right lay a chef.
The sweat beading over his face
Leaves grew out the wok like shoots.

To my left lay a tree
With its ancient oak inlaid with the tales 
of a thousand days
 and a thousand more sleepless nights.

In front of me lay you;
And you made it beautiful.
You broke the scene,
but made the peace.

The sun must have loved me once.
The wind must have loved me once.
You have yet to love me
even once.

It mattered to me
Did it matter to you?

*I'd love some feedback on this as I'm quite new to this affair and would like to improve

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