u/Frequent-Cash-6696

Hello everyone, I am posting for the first time in this subreddit group.
I made my first roblox game. It is very small at this stage (but will update with time).

I am not good in designing so I used free asset, as I dont have other options.
I will really appreciate if anyone will guide me about what errors I made and how to improve it more.

game name - DarkPine
game link - https://www.roblox.com/games/103211332131123/DarkPine