u/FrostingThick8166

Looking for writing partners

Hi everyone. I’m developing an aesthetic, sensual, slightly avant-garde TV series and I’m looking for a serious writing partner.

It’s not “erotic TV” in the obvious sense. I’m interested in desire, performance, beauty, obsession, intimacy, power, clothes, rooms, silence, glances, strange relationships, and the games people play when they want to be loved or seen.

The tone is visual, cool, feminine, a bit uncomfortable, and character-driven. More stylish and atmospheric than plot-heavy, but I still want it to work as a real series, with strong structure, tension, and characters.

I have the core idea, world, tone, themes, references, and character dynamics. I’m looking for someone to help develop it into a pilot, bible, and eventually a package for labs or development opportunities.

Ideally looking for someone with good taste, TV structure instincts, and interest in intimate, visual, experimental but watchable storytelling.

DM me with a little about your writing background and what kind of work you’re into.

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u/FrostingThick8166 — 14 days ago

I turned my weird deadpan erotic girl-diary script into 5 screenplay pages. Does the tone feels original or just confusing?

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Hi! I’m developing this as a 10-minute extract from an avant-garde show, almost like a deadpan diary chapter.

The tone I’m aiming for is funny, slightly erotic, ordinary-factual, feminine, rural, strange, and not too “explained.” It follows Priscilla, a broke ex beauty contestant who inherits a countryside house from a grandmother she barely knew and starts documenting the experience through calm, specific monologue fragments.

I’d love feedback on:

  1. Does the voiceover feel original or too written?

  2. Does the “ordinary facts” narration work with the surreal/erotic rural imagery?

  3. Is the plot clear enough: city girl inherits rural house, arrives, receives chicks, adapts badly?

  4. Does the plumber/bathtub scene feel funny and intimate without becoming too obvious?

  5. Would you want to keep watching this as one chapter of a larger avant-garde series?

Thanks!

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u/FrostingThick8166 — 1 month ago