u/Genderfluid_Jasper

I’m trying to draw a vampire lady but she’s not looking how I imagined, maybe it’s the dress, maybe the hairstyle I don’t know. As you can see I’ve finished the line work and I started moving onto color but I can’t get it to look right and it’s something I don’t think rendering can fix.
I like the bangs until I go to add color and suddenly it looks too messy.
I was trying to have her holding a now empty wine glass of blood but I don’t think I did it well, again something feels wrong. I hate the way the blood looks on her lips, but I don’t know how to correct it.
Any thoughts or suggestions?