u/GrapefruitPresent987

Dinner for one

*Dinner for one*

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The mountains loom with soaring strength,

surrounding the lagoon and its twinkling presence,

and somewhere in between, sits a quiet hut,

well maintained, the garden cut.

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A man comes out, yawns and stretches,

a smile gleaming across his face

equipment in bag, rod and bait,

he pulls it up and heads off straight.

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Straight to the small overhang, next to his hut

blooming with flowers and shining bright.

On there a camper chair, folded up

and a table he uses for his cup.

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He folds it out, the same routine,

and prepares himself for his usual day,

of catching fish and taking the meat

back to his hut so he can eat.

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The line is tossed, the wait begins,

sat in this grand mountain range,

is a man, fishing, as he always will,

for food to put back on his grill.

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The water shimmers, it’s ambience pure

the sunlight radiates energy across

the natural fields of rich green

the greatest the man has ever seen.

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And he waits for hours, to catch some food,

the sun has set, the crickets chirp.

Two small Salmon, caught and hooked,

a modest dinner ready to be cooked.

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But the man doesn’t care, his routine is done,

his land is boundless but his house so small,

as he takes his gear back to his place,

hangs it up, and grabs a plate.

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Dinner for one, dinner for one.

Yet it still feels like dinner for all

the outside darkens all the same

and nature sings outside the frame.

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would really appreciate any criticism/feedback!

Beyond
The dock sits rotting, ready to collapse,
but the fruitful forest still naturally glows
the wood board creaks, the branch snaps, 
this dock has seen too many shows. 

I board my boat, its sides are worn,
the Helm is beautifully aged,
the key turns, an engine reborn,
my smile grows, the show now staged.

The throttle kicks, but I am off and away.
A child excited, the sunlight beams,
the songbirds chirp, the boat sways, 
the journey’s beauty brings alluring dreams.

When my boat was fresh, the hull was new,
it used to fly down these delicate streams
the rush riveting, the elation grew
as I dashed past the rolling greens.

Looking ahead, the race goes on,
I dodge the rocks, swerve the bends,
the wind strong, my worries gone,
the trip complete, the journey ends.

But now the sprint is just a walk
the forest fresh and rich with life,
yet so still as the wildlife talks
with purity and grace rife.

The Robin sings, the Tit whistles, 
the deer cavort in charming style, 
the grasslands filled with flowers and thistles,
that makes this journey so worthwhile.

The engine coughs, tired and weary,
I park back up at the tattered dock.
The journey done, but I’m still cheery
my boat sits idle, as birdlife flock.

I turn around, look up and down,
my boat ruined, the engines still,
the water carries echoes now
beyond the bend, beyond the hill.

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u/GrapefruitPresent987 — 3 days ago

Skimmed across the river

A stone skimmed across the river
leaves a beautiful history
of droplets and rings,
what elegance it brings.

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Then it drifts, eventually,
down the river’s path,
no longer observed 
in the light it deserved.

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The things I would do,
to be the lucky man
that finds that simple beam
on the other side of the stream.

first time using rhyming couplets so i would really appreciate some feedback!

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u/GrapefruitPresent987 — 4 days ago