Black Hole Sun.
Opening to a short story I'm writing, what do you think? Would you continue reading?
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The sun still hasn’t come up, my name is John Correy, the time is 1:23pm. August 12th 2026, when waking up to work at the office the sun was gone. The skies were pitch black, not a speck of light to be seen, out the windows sat only darkness which felt as though they suffocated all those within it. We were told it was an eclipse, one which would quickly pass.
Its been two weeks.
I didn’t go to work that day, I called in sick. I couldn’t do it, something about that pitch black that sat outside just didn’t sit right with me. Seeds of doubt planting themselves within my stomach, laying like iron. When my family called, they called me paranoid.
Its been a week since I’ve last heard from them.
Currently I am sitting within my house, the authorities have issued an order for us to wait. To stay within the confines of our own homes until help arrives.