u/Haridath

This is my 2nd book and I'm super excited to hear what readers think.

Title: S.I.R.E.N Case File 2: Zachriah Smith

Genre: YA Spy Thriller / Sci-Fi

Word Count: ~66,000 words

POV: Third Person Limited (Multi-POV)

Format: Google Docs / Word

Timeline: 3–4 weeks

Blurb: Sixteen-year-old Adam Turner thought he had earned a break after his first mission with SIREN (Secret Intelligence and Rapid Enforcement Network). But when a ghost from the past resurfaces, the quiet is shattered.

Zachariah Smith—a washed-up child star turned master thief—is back with a theatrical vengeance. His target: the Dumont Diamond, a pink hexagonal anomaly with uncanny electric properties and a mysterious extraterrestrial origin. From a high-stakes boarding of a two-hundred-kiloton freighter to a literal "flying ship" over the London skyline, Adam and his tech-support best friend, Reg, are the only assets close enough to stop him.

As Smith deploys an arsenal of retro-themed gadgets—from explosive Rubik’s Cubes to bulletproof bubble gum—Adam finds himself caught in a "triple-blind paradox". Between a new girl at school who isn't what she seems and a mind-control signal threatening the southern coast of England, Adam must prove that he’s more than just a recruit in a fancy suit.

Interested? Please comment below!

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u/Haridath — 22 days ago
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Blurb:
He’s been a very bad boy.

In 1995, Zachariah Smith was the bowl-cut-wearing king of TV. Now, the former child star is back with a deadly new script and a "Golden Age" built on weaponized nostalgia.

When Smith pulls off an impossible heist that puts London in his crosshairs, SIREN agent Adam Turner must navigate a neon-lit gauntlet of 80s-inspired traps. Alongside his team, Adam faces a villain who treats international crime like a primetime special.

Can they outmanoeuvre a mastermind who lives for the drama, or is it finally lights out for Britain?

I've been writing a book. I'm a new author this is only my second book. It's part of a series of books called SIREN Case Files...
I'm mostly done with this one but just needed some feedback regarding any errors in the story, formatting errors, repeated paragraphs or story plot holes etc...

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u/Haridath — 22 days ago