Help me by giving feedback
Hi!
I have been studying sumerian as a hobby for some years now. But there is a problem: I only study from books. This is not to a lack of trying in finding a teacher. I just live in a country where I can name everyone who know sumerian well enough, and most of them are retired. The rest in other cities.
So I have this problem that I can't get feedback on the excercises I give myself. Take for example this translation of a passage in the akkadian version of the epic of Gilgamesh. What am I doing wrong here? Am I doing anything wrong?
Ud as aniba imin dGilgamesh dEnkidu-ra gaba i-sag-de gub-ba. Ud-bi ba-zal. dGilgamesh-
e kui-ani ki i-nu-tum enna mar kiri-ta i-sub-ba. Ud-bi-a en tur-re dGilgamesh-e ki-se gu i-
mu-un-de: dilib-gu mu-en, siki bar-ra-me-en. Edenlil-la dag-ed-en, kus pirin-a mur-ed-en.
For context I should say, that I have been using the ePSD-dictionary, and textbook on grammar by Aleksi Sahala.