


Fan-fiction short story review
Hey y'all, I just finished up the 1st of a handful of short stories centered around The Havoc and it's Captain Nym. I was wondering if there was anyone here who'd be good at proof reading it?
I started it years ago but ran into a writing wall, finally (with some AI help/inspiration) I was able to finish it up the past few days. Its 5 quick chapters, less than 30 pages. And as of right now I've got ideas and an outline for at least 3 more.
Let me know if anyone here could help me out. I'd like to see how this one is, what edits I should make, things like that before diving into the next one.
Thanks!
(Pics from some custom jobs I had done years ago 😀)