u/Holloway_da_author

Looking for feedback on my atmospheric coming-of-age mystery story

Looking for feedback on my atmospheric coming-of-age mystery story

Hey everyone!

I’m a newer writer and just started posting my first long-form story on Wattpad. I’d genuinely love some feedback and thoughts from people who enjoy emotional mystery / coming-of-age stories.

It’s got small-town mystery vibes with a supernatural edge — inspired by the atmosphere of Stranger Things, Super 8, and Stand By Me (not comparing myself to them obviously lol, just the type of feeling I love).

So far, 5 chapters have been released, with Chapter 6 coming soon.

The story follows Liam as he moves to a new town and begins noticing strange things in the woods behind his house.

Would love to hear what people think if anyone decides to check it out :)

https://www.wattpad.com/1629061909?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=reading&wp_uname=MHolloway99

u/Holloway_da_author — 4 days ago