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Dying in your grave won’t be a guilt,
Guilt is temporary — happiness, its last day.
What remains is hate, and better than both,
Eternity stays.
The heavy air I breathed is finally clear,
The weighted back is light,
the burdens fall.
No longer holding on to fragile hope,
I step beyond the
shadow of it all.
Let the fleeting feelings fade away,
The quiet after storms is where I stand.
A permanent goodbye to what is broken,
An endless peace within a silent land.
“She was like first rain on my crops”
freezing yet scary,
thought grown rice,
turn into creepers on my mind,
i might cut them
but its rain they listen to
maybe
“killing isn’t everything its the the soul that remain”
Dying in your grave won't be a guilt,
Guilt remain temporary, it wont be happiness for it last day.
It will be a hate for it, better than those two,
Stay eternity.
The heavy air I breathed is finally clear,
The weighted back is light, the burdens fall.
No longer holding on to fragile hope,
I step beyond the shadow of it all.
Let the fleeting feelings fade away,
The quiet after storms is where I stand.
A permanent goodbye to what is broken,
An endless peace within a silent land
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Maybe the sun wasnt fair enough
to compare from u
So he burn radiant glow skin
So
u compare with moon thus the pharse came
"moon is beautiful isnt it?"
that’s how you are