Painting on Canvas with Paint that’s Red

You asked me to paint the canvas red
But you didn’t provide any paint at all
So I borrowed paint that’s red from you
But why do you look so dead?
The canvas red with the paint that’s red
Stands where you now look so pretty, so dead
Though the bloody smell can never be lost,
(With only the red paint as your cost)
I’ve done the job you’ve asked me to;
Yet my salary’s all gone, burnt by your hatred
On the canvas painted with paint that’s red -
A sacred art that can never be admired,
For it’s burnt in the depths
Of your heart which fired…
So what had I done all this work for?
Though you now look so dead,
There is indeed a thing I can get:
A thing by now useless - your paint that’s red.

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u/IdV_Elliealla9 — 20 days ago

What do you think of my newest chapter? My writing style’s changing for some reason

Is this kinda writing style nice? :D is this angsty? Please tell me what you think, thank you so muchhh <3

(Btw, I’m a ESL!)

u/IdV_Elliealla9 — 21 days ago

Soo funny story, I showed a teacher my fanfic a few weeks ago :)

…I regret it.

And rn I’m wondering what she’d say as the story progresses…

She doesn’t know anything about this fandom, but I see her everyday at school (she’s my class teacher, and will remain my class teacher for 3 years)

…wonder if there’s anything I shouldn’t write included for someone my age…?

Hmm… what do y’all think, seeing my tags?

u/IdV_Elliealla9 — 1 month ago