u/Illustrious-Hippo-38

I've been seeing some significant improvement in my art recently but with that improvement the signs of where I need work are becoming harder for me to diagnose. All I can tell is its still not where I want it. For this one I think what stands out the most is the line art needed another pass and is a bit messy or inconsistent. But apart from that I'm not sure exactly what is missing here.

I used Clip studio, and references were used just for details of the character (Metalgreymon from Digimon), but the pose and composition I came up with. My main inspiration for the style was an artist who goes by Spareribs. I appreciate any advice, thank you!

https://www.pixiv.net/en/users/47170637 this is a page of the artist