u/Impressive_Candle_14

hello i need help with my logo for my art brand! the first is designed by my brother and i like it but i want the peach to read more clear as an “a” like the one in the quick mockup my friend made as an example at the end. i tried editing it on procreate to make some rough drafts for how it could look but i don’t like how any of them turned out :( need advice please!