u/Impressive_East958

This was my first song and ik its too long, so Initially i made this song for my family as a song we could sing whenever there's a special occasion. So the vocals are cutout and lyrics are too. The transitions parts have chorus too. so maybe if u guys help me on what I could work on I could make the song better and it would help me greatly to work on music more.

all ur opinions matter to make me better and atlast lemme know if u like it😌.