Need feedback for a school project!! 🥺🙏
so i’ve to create an Instagram series of comics/illustrations about my dog for a school project and i was told to get some comments from other people 🙏
this is the latest post i’ve made and the art is closer to what i had envisioned (the first few were bad and you can see them on the instagram page too) thought not fully yet
i think the feedback i need now is how can i improve on my art and make it more engaging to the audiences
personally, i think my strokes are kinda unsteady (esp since i rarely draw) and i feel like the story i’m trying to tell is not engaging enough (falls kinda flat) 😭
i’m trying to go for a japanese kawaii (cute) style and more minimalist iygwim (coz i don’t think i’ve the capability and ability to go really detailed). and i want to go for this slightly unclean? /hand drawn / not perfect look
emotions wise im trying to make it funny, heartwarming, and like make people go “oh it’s cute!”
would love to hear your thoughts 🙏🙏🙏 thank you!! 🫶