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here we are again.. i tried again and I think I have a better concept of this and how to think about my ideas, i feel like I’m kinda broad still or maybe not fully getting what I should, but idk because I’m not an ap reader—I’d love any tips!

AP® English Literature and Composition 2023 Scoring Guidelines © 2023 College Board Question 3: Literary Argument 6 points 

In many works of literature, characters choose to reinvent themselves for significant reasons. They may wish to separate from a previous identity, gain access to a different community, disguise themselves from hostile forces, or express a more authentic sense of self. Either from your own reading or from the following list, choose a work of fiction in which a character intentionally creates a new identity. Then, in a well-written essay, analyze how the character’s reinvention contributes to an interpretation of the work as a whole. Do not merely summarize the plot. 

In your response, you should do the following: • Respond to the prompt with a thesis that presents a defensible interpretation. • Provide evidence to support your line of reasoning. • Explain how the evidence supports your line of reasoning. • Use appropriate grammar and punctuation in communicating your argument.

In F451, Guy Montag is shaped by Clarisse McCllean and her ideas that go against societal norms, revealing that individuality still exists in Guy’s broken society and people can still be affected by it.

Guy Montag’s whim of change is sparked by the ideas Clarisse introduces him to, establishing her as a motivating force in his new identity. Clarisse’s indifference to the digitized conformity displayed in her society shows her ability to connect with others well, something Guy doesn’t truly grasp with any one else. Her ability to think fully about concepts contrasts with the societal pleasure released from TV, reinforcing how detached society has become from reality. Clarisse’s ideas further spark creativity and confusion; the idea that Firemen used to be “hero’s” is foreign to Guy and causes him to rethink his 9-5. This builds on his need to reinvent himself and break away from what he believed was right, further indicating how passive his society has become over the years. If the only way people can connect is through screens and fake relationships, humanity is already being destroyed, connecting the book to Bradbury’s fear of the steady incline of digitization.  

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u/Independent-Bike6312 — 21 days ago
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hello! i am a senior and taking ap's for the first time. i am taking ap lit and i am always oversharing on my essays even though i dont need to. i took this prompt from a 2025 example one, could anyone help me out? i know its not amazing--what i wrote--but i'd like some tips 😄

In many works of literature, characters may be significantly affected by memories of the past. A character may be inspired by the past, haunted by the past, unable to let go of the past, or motivated by the past to craft a better future. Either from your own reading or from the list below, choose a work of fiction in which a character is significantly affected by a memory. Then, in a wellwritten essay, analyze how the impact of the memory on the character contributes to an interpretation of the work as a whole. Do not merely summarize the plot. 

In The Great Gatsby, F. Scott Fitzgerald displays Jay Gatsby as a pensive, obstinate character, portrayed from the eyes of Nick Carraway. Fitzgerald’s symbols highlight the theme of the dangers of constantly trying to return to the past. Comparing him to Icarus–who famously flew into the sun and displayed extreme pride–Gatsby throws himself into his own sun, the green light. Gatsby’s admiration of the green light is made known through his dissociative focus on it, ultimately suggesting the effect it has on his life. It is a constant reminder of his old lover Daisy, and further a visceral ache of what he cannot return to. People who suffer expect to be rewarded for their efforts; Gatsby wastes five years of his life and loses his identity along the way–he is not rewarded, and his actions only highlight the theme more by presenting a character who loses everything to fit into someone else’s world.   
  He displays not only an ambitious fall, but a full submission to whatever love could bring him. Love reshapes one and takes time, and Gatsby, to the readers subjective eyes, knew the full consequences. The light, again, is that constant nostalgic reminder, but to Gatsby, it serves as a false sense of hope to rekindle with his old lover in a world he knows he doesn’t truly belong in. The foreboding of his fall is prominent in the detached way Daisy speaks to Jay towards the end of the novel, prompting the outset of Gatsby’s moral integrity dissipating in the wrong society. Gatsby’s pursuit of the past and hope for love reveals the dangers of living with false pretenses and the overall consumerability nostalgia holds over humanity.

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