u/JJBrownx

Blurb Critique

I’m writing a medical thriller and would love some feedback on my blurb. Would you read this book based on the blurb? What conclusions for the plot can you draw from this blurb? What would you rate it out of 10?

Blurb:

Amelia collapses at work and is suffering from a major health scare. She’s trapped in the ICU and her chances of survival are near impossible.

Nicolas discovers his wife, Roselyn, never made it back home from her flight and is declared a missing person. As an ER surgeon, his world is breaking as he struggles to cope with finding his wife and his job.

With the help of Detective Scarlett Holland, they work day and night to solve the case of Roselyn’s disappearance. However, when Amelia and Nicolas meet, their attraction toward each other is inseparable.

Will Nicolas find Roselyn again or will he live with the grief of finding her dead body?

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u/JJBrownx — 11 days ago