i need plot advice
hi ren'py community! my name is asia, and i am very new to this subreddit and gamedev in general. i am working on a visual novel on ren'py right now and i need advice for how my plot will advance. here's what i did so far:
the story revolves around an old man whose death is close, and meets his younger self in an abstract, immaterial space. he goes on a journey from where he's first anxious; so paranoid about his fate that he starts overthinking about all the ways his life could end, which puts him through psychological torment; to finally a point where he accepts death with open arms. he gets to progressively know more and more about his younger self through contacts they make in his realm from time to time, and ends up reconciling with it.
please let me know how you find it and any type of help is welcome!